The
arts have been a part of culture for thousands of years. They have been used to
tell stories, provide entertainment for dignitaries and royalty, and acted as
an outlet for emotions. If art has been a part of culture for this long then
why are arts and education slowly disappearing from public schools across the
country? In Reinvesting in Arts
Education: Winning America’s Future Through Creative Schools the president
commissions a call for arts and education to remain strong partners. It argues
that, “Students who do graduate from
high school are increasingly the products of narrowed curricula, lacking the
creative and critical thinking skills needed for success in post-secondary
education and the workforce,“(United States V).
This article aims
to educate citizens of America about the necessity of keeping arts synonymous
with education. It’s a dire time in this country economically and because of
this we are defunding the arts in public schools, as a way to make money for
other necessities without realizing that the arts is a necessity. The
commission maintains that the only way to insure that arts and education can
remain a strong combination is if collaborations among different approaches are
built, develop the field of arts integration, and expand in-school
opportunities for teaching artists. The
authors make their points and thesis very apparent and noted. The assertions
are supported by statistical evidence and personal testimony. The author cites
authority very well giving credit where it is due. There is no personal
experience or observations in this article because there is enough statistical
evidence that the author does not need to assert himself in that way. “Earlier
studies about the benefits of arts integration reported that arts integration
approaches were successful in producing better attendance and fewer discipline
problems, increased graduation rates, and improved test scores; motivating
students who were difficult to reach otherwise; and providing challenges to
more academically successful students,” (United States19). There is a
very defined concept that is flushed out through the article in a very detailed
way.
The
authors of this article are actually the president’s cabinet so the opinion and
thesis of this article is representative of the president. President Obama has
two young children; he understands the importance of art in the classroom and
how it can help children think on a more abstract and creative level. Obama’s
platform also has to embody the platform of the Democratic Party. He is the
face of the Democratic Party and if he doesn’t support their ideals then he
will have a lot of trouble in the Senate or House of Representatives receiving
support from his fellow Democrats on various bills. According to the article, “Leaders worry that the United
States is losing its competitive edge in creativity and innovation, and that
the call for ever more rigorous academic standards is insufficient with- out a
concomitant focus on developing creativity and imagination,” (United States 29).
The
author is targeting the citizens of the United States in order to get their support;
if citizens support this impending policy change and movement then they will
pressure their senators and representatives to vote in favor of a bill that
could fund more public school art programs. The author is writing in the current
time period this is an issue that has always been a problem but now more than
ever it is apparent. The time period makes the topic even more intense and
necessary for action. The time period has also affected the data used in this
article, “The national dropout rate
has fluctuated between 25-30% since 2001, and for some demographic groups and
geographic areas, the statistics are far worse,”(United States 27-28). This
article was published from the President’s office; the audience is the voting
public as well as senator’s and representatives.
The
author’s style and tone is very calm and logical. There isn’t any language that
suggests that the author is becoming agitated or angry as they continue to write
and support their thesis. The article says, “Decades of research show strong and consistent
links between high-quality arts education and a wide range of impressive
educational outcomes,” (United States vi). The author gives lots of
support and factual evidence, which allows for them to not use loaded language
or lots of emotion to get their point across. Also the way in which the authors
discuss this topic is in a way that the general public can understand. There is
no legal jargon in this article or any vocabulary that would be too much for a
generally educated individual.
Stating the thesis
with the main points and then supporting those points with evidence and
statistical reference organize the essay. The essay is organized this way in
order to make the point known and support it efficiently. Basically the author
wants to get the point across as quickly and efficiently as possible. The
arrangement is categorized by problem-solution. The author gives a thesis and
then states different things that will solve the thesis and make it a reality.
The
article revisits the thesis and proceeds to conclude how the main points will
fix this. The article claims that arts in education can help to increase
academic achievement, school engagement, and critical thinking by building
collaborations among different approaches, develop the field of arts
integration, and expand in-school opportunities for teaching artists. In order
to keep arts and education strong partners looking to the community is the only
answer to make it a reality. The article asserts, “The urgency for major
education reform expressed by
Secretary of Education Duncan has been echoed by President Barack Obama and
leaders in all sectors,”(United States 27). Having strong community
partners and engaging the people surrounding schools to help makes it a group
effort and brings the nation closer together. Its important for our nation to
take a stand on this issue because according to this article and the opinion of
the president it is in the best interest for our children.
United States. President’s Committee on the
Arts and the Humanities, “Reinvesting in Arts Education: Winning America’s Future
Through Creative Schools. “President’s
Committee on the Arts and the Humanities. Knight Foundation, President’s
Committee on the Arts and the Humanities, and the Stephen and Myrna Greenberg
Philanthropic Fund of the Jewish Communal Fund Washington, DC, May 2011.
Web.
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